
Originally Posted by
damian_steele
Well, I don't know about other people, but I'll tell you what puts me off.
1.
I strongly dislike your choice of colours, styles and layout for the auction description.
The jazzy backgrounds look amateurish, the text looks messy and that spangly/starry font does my eyes in.
I'd suggest you tidy it up, lose the background, lose the spangles and align the text in a table.
2.
Your honesty is self-defeating.
That reads like a get-out clause for watches which will probably break within ten minutes and are manky. It's not how you meant it to be read and I'm sure it's not true, either.
If you insist on being this honest, then stick it on your ABOUT page and link to it but get it off the auctions themselves.
So that's my opinion. Obviously you are free to tell me to get stuffed and ignore what I've written, or you could take it as constructive criticism and consider making some changes. Remember, most sellers never find out why people ignore their auctions, these comments could be gold dust.